Family Secrets - Revelation - Chapter 24
Thank-you for the comments, a few more chapters before the reasoning for Jarrod's past behavior is brought to light. “Thompson,” Jarrod yelled. “What the devil are you doing here? I told you to stay...
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I am really beginning to feel very bad for Jarrod. Nobody seems to be on his side. I know he has reasons for his actions and will be glad when we finally find out what they are but I do think the...
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I'm hooked on this slightly darker, hurting Jarrod. It's ridiculous how frequently I look for updates to this tale. Please keep it coming!
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damn. Jarrod, a Vic slap? he has hit rock bottom
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I think there is more to this then any of us realize. I don’t think that Jarrod is angry at Heath, not really, it’s something deeper.”There MUST be. We all know Jarrod can't be so disreputable. Why...
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I like how you are showing Jarrod backed into the corner, and still fighting the invertible. Yes, I think Jarrod has finally hit rock bottom.
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I'm looking forward to finding out Jarrod's reasons and to see him redeem himself. I don't think I would have liked this Jarrod as a permanent character in the show, but you have me hooked now and...
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Jarrod has all kinds of tangled up motivations. I'm very interested in how you untangle him. Thanks for sticking with this story.
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I am anxiously awaiting the unraveling of Jarrod's thought processes. From where I'm sitting, it looks like his halo has not only slipped, he's thrown it on the ground and stomped on it.
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heathrmine, from where i'm sitting, it looks like j's family has taken his halo and put it atop the new brother's head.
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Sweetspur wrote:heathrmine, from where i'm sitting, it looks like j's family has taken his halo and put it atop the new brother's head.Ok SS I'll give you that one
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